My scariest moment in Cat Tien was when we went back to our block alone. Me, Emily and Mindy was sticking together because we are afraid of ghost, when we nearly came to our block, we hear a tree shaking, we were really scare, then suddenly, Terry jump out of the tree and scare us. We scream a lot and run straight back to the campfire. Then we tried to not be scare and 1 more time, head back to our block. We still stick together like glue, and then suddenly, Lucky and Mickey from the back touch our shoulder, we scream as loud as we can and turn around, Lucky and Mickey were laughing really hard. Mindy chased them all around. Then, we head back to our block. When we entered our room, Mindy go to the toilet and she scream, Emily come to see what is happening, we saw an ORANGE FROG!!! Mindy ran out of the toilet and jump in to the bed. Then, Emily closed the toilet door and we all when to sleep. Me and Mindy was kind of scare to we told Emily to go to the next room, Lisa, Susan and Tien Ho room. We went in to their room and started to go asleep. Mr. Elliot knocked at Lisa room door, we were really scare, and then me, Mindy and Emily ran in to the toilet and giggling. When Mr. Elliot came out, we ran out of the bathroom and we all laugh. That is the Scariest and the funniest moment to our flied trip.
I like your story, but I think I was with Lucky when we scared you. We were scared, too, of your screaming. Your word choice is very good, and your sentences are very fluent. I give you a 12 out of 12.
ReplyDelete:)) yeh, i forget to memtion u :( sorry :)), and yeh, u should scare of our SCREAM :))
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